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Bruised - WIP

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Sketching two dudes fighting coz I felt like it. Probably going to end up making one of them Finn. Don’t know who the other one will be yet.

Critique welcomed. Especially on the guy on the bottom, because I’m very annoyed at his head, I don’t know what to do with it. I can provide the reference pic if needed.

Any proportion out of whack that I need to fix?
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I like the concept idea a lot, it's very nice.
However, I am unsure about what is going on with the feet of the guy who is pinned down. I assume that one of those feet is Finn's, I am just unsure of which.

Other than that, I'd say just define and bulk up the arm that Finn is about to swing into that other guys face.